Cadbury Milk chocolate writing

We got told by Mrs Mcguinniety to taste chocolate but first we had to go threw our five senses look in my story con you guess what it is

Attempt 1 Before Mrs McGuinniety told us to taste it she told us to feel it and I felt smooth creamy base with the words adbury on it because that is the factory it came from. It also felt like a smoothie in a blending machine. When she told us to listen we did and when she opened I could hear a CRACKLING!! from the tin foil and a CRUNCH!! from when she squashed it. And when she snapped it was like somebody got their heart broken Because it was like SNAP!! Then Mrs McGuinniety  handed the chocolate out we only got one square each and we got told to look at it and describe what it looked. It looked like a chocolate river with a big waterfall on the end of it. As it was staring at me my mouth started to water. By then it was time to smell so I did and it smelt like angels have blessed it. OMG it smelt so good I couldn’t wait till the next step. It was amazing in my head I thought we needed to hurry and I also was worried that it would met in my hand. The the time had come we got to taste it so I gulped it in my mouth and boy was it good. It tasted blessed like little sweet angels came down and it was awesome. It was like the chocolate said come to me and put me in your mouth so I did. Sadly it faded and melted in my mouth. Sadly that is the end of my story but I wonder what is the next thing we will experiment on. THE END

Attempt 2 Before Mrs McGuinniety told us to taste it she told us to feel it and It felt smooth creamy base with the words Cadbury on it because that is the factory it came from. It also felt like a smoothie in a blending machine. With my favourite fruits in like grapes and apples (yum that will make a good chocolate) When she told us to listen we did and when she opened It I could hear a CRACKLING from the tin foil and a CRUNCH from when she squashed it. And when she snapped it was like somebody got their heart broken because it was like SNAP. It was in half the chocolate got snapped in half so we all could have a piece Then Mrs McGuinniety  handed the chocolate out we only got one square each and we got told to look at it and describe what it looked. It looked like a chocolate river with a big waterfall on the end of it. As it was staring at me my mouth started to water. It was like a great flood nowhere to be seen because it was in my mouth. By then it was time to smell so I did and it smelt like angels have blessed it. OMG it smelt so good I couldn’t wait till the next step. It was amazing in my head I thought we needed to hurry and I also was worried that it would met in my hand. I smelt like what I imagined heaven smelt like but way way way better The the time had come we got to taste it so I gulped it in my mouth and boy was it good. It tasted blessed like little sweet angels came down and it was awesome. It was like the chocolate said come to me and put me in your mouth so I did. Sadly it faded and melted in my mouth. Sadly that is the end of my story but I wonder what is the next thing we will experiment on. THE END But wait we have a problem the chocolate Is gone Don Don Don.