We got told by Mrs Mcguinniety to taste chocolate but first we had to go threw our five senses look in my story con you guess what it is
Attempt 1
At writing today something exciting happened Mrs McGuinniety Brought chocolate for us to taste,smell,feel,see and hear.
When Mrs McGuinniety told us to listen to her opening it and I heard cracking and wrinkling of the wrapping paper unleashing the gooey white chocolate. But when she snapped it I had a good idea what it would sound like it sounded like this SNAP!! And CRACK!!.
Then she handed it out and told us to feel it and it felt like a smooth creamy brick it felt amazing. But it was making me feel like I wanted to eat it now but I knew that I couldn't eat it because it was for writing.
And after we felt it we got told to look at it for a while and then describe what we see I saw a white smooth,creamy,gooey,block of chocolate it looked like what I imagine heaven looks like but better.
Soon we were at taste but we weren't we were at smell It smelt like a smoothie mixed with milk and cream because it was it was so good I couldn’t wait to taste so I waited patiently till it was time for taste.
Then it was time to start tasting and as soon as I got told to eat it but don’t bite it I was straight into it instead of biting it I sucked on it for a long time it took a long time but I was finally finished it the we described it it tasted like Heaven but better than better it was awesome I just wanted more and more that's how good it was. I couldn’t wait until our next experiment I wonder what it will be.
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Attempt 2
At writing today something exciting happened Mrs McGuinniety Brought chocolate for us to taste,smell,feel,see and hear.
When Mrs McGuinniety told us to listen to her opening it and I heard cracking and wrinkling of the wrapping paper unleashing the gooey white chocolate. But when she snapped it I had a good idea what it would sound like it sounded like this SNAP!! And CRACK!!. The chocolate was snapped.
Then she handed it out and told us to feel it and it felt like a smooth creamy brick it felt marvelous . But it was making me feel like I wanted to eat it now but I knew that I couldn't eat it because it was for writing.
And after we felt it we got told to look at it for a while and then describe what we see I saw a white smooth milky gooey block of chocolate it looked like what I imagine heaven looks like but better.
Soon we were at taste but we weren't we were at smell It smelt like a smoothie mixed with milk and cream because it was it was so good I couldn’t wait to taste so I waited patiently till it was time for taste.
Then it was time to start tasting and as soon as I got told to eat it but don’t bite it I was straight into it instead of biting it I sucked on it for a long time it took a long time but I was finally finished it the we described it it tasted like The great unknown world above but better than better it was awesome I just wanted more and more that's how good it was. I couldn’t wait until our next experiment I wonder what it will be.
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