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Friday 18 November 2016

Selling a stick

Here is my persuasive writing about selling a stick and I learnt that you can play with your writing



Introduction
Hook / questions (no more than 3)   Are you waiting for that ultimate prank for christmas?Do you need to get out of sticky situations? Wood you like the ultimate object?

Introduce your stick - What you are selling   Have you been waiting for that fantas-stick buddy? Are stick and tired of your friends leafing you behind well I present to the most amazing… A Stick with 50% Stick and 50% Speed also totally natural made



Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point
Paragraph 1

It is not Pla-stick
  • This stick it is not pla-stick it is 50% stick and 50% speed so it can get places fast but not a fast as Usain Bolt


  • We make sure that a stick is not pla-stick (:
Main Point
Paragraph 2

It will stick to its friend
  • Do you have a friend that will stick to you because it is your best friend for life

  • Your friend will not leaf you behind because they don’t got no legs
Main Point
Paragraph 3
Have you ever wanted someone to stick up for you?
  • Well your friend the stick will never leave your side       



  • And the stick will make sure that you are safe for as long as it does not snap
Conclusion
Sum up what you have been talking about
So,Consider buying this stick because it is not Pla-stick also It will stick to its friend. Lastly Have you ever wanted someone to stick up for you? O wait I just remembered to tell you that No trees were harmed in the making of this stick persuasive writing.



Stick-tastic Stick
Are you waiting for that ultimate prank for Christmas? Do you need to get out of sticky situations? Wood you like the ultimate object? Have you been waiting for that fantas-stick buddy? Are you sick and tired of your friends leafing you behind? Well, I present to you the most amazing gadgetA Stick with 50% Stick and 50% Speed, also totally naturally made. For these reasons you need this stick. Because it is 100% NOT pla-stick, it is wood. Another reason why this stick is great to have is because it is guaranteed to stick to its friend. Also, have you ever wanted someone to stick up for you? Well you need this stick.

Firstly, the stick is not pla-stick. This stick is guaranteed that this is not pla-stick, it’s wood. It is actually 50% stick and 50% speed, so it can get places fast, faster than Usain Bolt. But wait there's more to this we make sure that a stick is not pla-stick, well hopefully it won't be plastic and if it is you can return it...maybe. If you are lucky we will give you another stick for free.

Secondly, It will stick to its friend. Do your friends always leave you behind? Do you want a friend that will stick to you because they are your best friend and your will always stick with you? Please don't go away there's more! Your friend will not leaf you behind because they don’t have legs. This is great because they will listen to you and help you and always be by your side.

Lastly Have you ever wanted someone to stick up for you? Well your friend the stick will never leave your side because if you are in danger the stick can save you. And the stick will make sure that you are safe for as long as it does not snap because the is strong stick.

So please ,Consider buying this stick because it is not Pla-stick and also It will stick to its friend. Lastly Have you ever wanted someone to stick up for you? O wait I just remembered to tell you that. This stick was used by John Cena in one of his fights(No trees or branches were harmed in the making of this stick persuasive writing!).


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