I remember smelling... Sizzling smoke after the flaming hot Fire
I remember tasting… the tangy tasty Ice cream after a hot day
I remember seeing… the helicopters flying to the blazing fire swoosh swoosh
That was summer!
I remember feeling… the blazing sun hitting the surface of my skin and the warmness of the inside of my belly
I remember hearing.. The creepy crawlies in the night with the owls chomping away
That was my summer!
I really like how you used really cool words and how you said I remember feeling the blazing on my skin.
ReplyDeleteHello Tamani I like what you have done about your work you have worked very hard I can see that I like how you said sizzling smoke after the flaming hot fire but next time can you make the title a different colour so we can see but over all keep up the good work
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